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Memory Lane
The asphalt contorts, twists, and conforms to the wear,
Discoloured gray stretching onward, indefinitely
(I long for the end,
But I know it does not exist).

I cannot turn back, and I cannot look away,
I fumble through my mistakes; it’s like walking on glass
(It hurts
And I have to keep going).

The sleet cuts through my translucent skin
Etching all of my hurt down into my brittle bones
(You cannot see my scars,
But I can still feel them).

My knees crash into the cold gray asphalt,
Leaving dark smears and cracked fears
(Just let me go,
Let me fall into emptiness).
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poem written by me
this is very personal to me..please don't be mean :(

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:iconnarutolover12344321:
Ohhh so sad. I love it so much...It reminds
me of my life...

Why'd you write this

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Im not weird, Im just a dreamer :)

I can see beauty in everything, can you? :D
:iconashengrayskies-lit:
because a close friend of mine is going through a hard time and it reminded me of all of the hard times i've faced, and how i managed to keep going, even when it hurt
i guess you could say i was inspired to create something beautiful for her

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alyssa-anne
:iconnarutolover12344321:
Ohh, so sweet. I hope you can help her, I rly do, and I hope you'll be alright.

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Im not weird, Im just a dreamer :)

I can see beauty in everything, can you? :D
:iconashengrayskies-lit:
our scars make us who we are...
oh crap now i wanna write a poem with that line...i guess i am writing 2 tonight =p
i hope i can too :( she's one of my closest and dearest friends

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alyssa-anne
:iconnarutolover12344321:
Our scars can not be erased. No matter how hard people try to make us forget. We feel them always, thats just the way it goes.

I hope you do too :(

--
Im not weird, Im just a dreamer :)

I can see beauty in everything, can you? :D
:iconashengrayskies-lit:
thanks <3
maybe its a good thing we cant erase our scars
it reminds us of what we've survived

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alyssa-anne
:iconnarutolover12344321:
Thats so true, it is better to have thes scars. People should not try to make us better

--
Im not weird, Im just a dreamer :)

I can see beauty in everything, can you? :D
:iconashengrayskies-lit:
everyone has their scars, whether they show or not is a different story, some scars are on the inside, and they are not seen, but they are always felt

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alyssa-anne
:iconnarutolover12344321:
I know what you mean...these scars are horrible.

My scars still hurt. My mom...shes a bitch, I try to do something right, and Im blamed for every thing. People hate me, they think Im weird, I hate that word.

I wish thes scars would leave me, but I don't think they ever will

--
Im not weird, Im just a dreamer :)

I can see beauty in everything, can you? :D

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