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If I have stumbled out of line and fallen wayward
Let me just say that it was all to catch your beautiful eye
Because your attention means the more than just the world to me

If I have crossed a boundary and done you wrong
May I please interject that I only wanted to hear your melodic voice
Because even the angriest words sound like heaven to my unworthy ears

If I have upset the balance and spoken out of turn
Can I not reason with you that when you turn around to face me
I lose all the air inside of my lungs and I feel the heat of the sun grace my face

If I have caused a catalyst and started a quarrel
Would it be wrong to try to save what has not flourished between us
Because in my dreams the deafening silence fades into your sweet voice,

The darkness fades slowly into your mesmerizing eyes,
And I can breathe again because my lungs have filled with air
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Author's Comments

poem written by me
I think it is complete now, but i may go back and revise it when I get home, I haven't written a nice poem in a while so this is kind of strange and out of character.

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:iconnarutolover12344321:
Awwww so sweet and cute and sad. I LUV IT!!

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Im not weird, Im just a dreamer :)

I can see beauty in everything, can you? :D
:iconashengrayskies-lit:
hahah thanks!!! =]
it's like the first not so depressing thing in my gallery XD

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alyssa-anne
:iconnarutolover12344321:
hahahha, I know, good job

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Im not weird, Im just a dreamer :)

I can see beauty in everything, can you? :D
:iconashengrayskies-lit:
thank you again <3

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alyssa-anne
:iconnarutolover12344321:
Ur welcome :iconpandablompplz:

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Im not weird, Im just a dreamer :)

I can see beauty in everything, can you? :D
:iconsk8rchik96:
Yeah this is good. "Upset the balance", Slipknot has become a part of you. :headbang:

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:skullbones: :ahoy: :skullbones:
:iconashengrayskies-lit:
haha just because corey says something doesn't mean that i stole his line =p

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alyssa-anne
:iconsk8rchik96:
I was just noticing how he influences you, it's neat! :D

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:skullbones: :ahoy: :skullbones:
:iconashengrayskies-lit:
haha well we both have extensive vocabs so i can see how you'd think that

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alyssa-anne

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